Nothing to do but destruct you

Reconstructionist fiction. The example I was given was The Princess Bride . That's what I was trying to do here with this two page story. And it is very much two pages. It was put to me, to break down the elements of my own comic creation and then build everything back up into a work of comic art. Rather than take the instructional character breaking the fourth wall route, ala Scott McCloud, I tried to go for a more conversational, and within the narrative approach. I also tried to make kind of a joke with the two page limit, you'll have to tell me if it's effective.